Blood drips like ribbons
as her voice trills in the dark
ending her last breath
©Pancake Bunnykins
Last Breath
An Asian Mermaid Lost In Transition
An Asian Mermaid Lost In Transition
Blood drips like ribbons
as her voice trills in the dark
ending her last breath
©Pancake Bunnykins
Oh! Wow! YOu leave me breathless! 😀
Thanks. Are you joining the challenge? 🙂
Hmmmm! I am afraid I am not good with haikus! HAHA
Of course you are! 🙂
Spine chilling Haiku! Oooha!
Thank you. 🙂
Awww. That’s so sweet of you! But really, I am not good in poetic forms.
Haha. I read some of your poems. And they’re good. 🙂
Oh… That’s so sweet of you to say! 😀
It’s true! 🙂
Whoa!! What imagery 🙂
Thank you. 🙂
This is one nice piece of storytelling. Loved it.
Thank you, Ron! 🙂
Superb
Thank you, Ruby. 🙂
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Ha! Didn’t expect that haiku after reading your gravatar info! But your blog title suggests one could expect anything 🙂 Excellent use of the prompt words.
Thank you so much! Yeah, I guess my blog is kinda twisted. 🙂
Love it–very unique 😀
Thank you again! 🙂
Reads like a horror story I want to continue reading. 😉
Thank you, Vashti!