Last Breath

23 Comments

1. Oh! Wow! YOu leave me breathless! 😀

2. Thanks. Are you joining the challenge? 🙂

3. Hmmmm! I am afraid I am not good with haikus! HAHA

4. Of course you are! 🙂

5. Spine chilling Haiku! Oooha!

6. Thank you. 🙂

7. Awww. That’s so sweet of you! But really, I am not good in poetic forms.

8. Haha. I read some of your poems. And they’re good. 🙂

9. Oh… That’s so sweet of you to say! 😀

10. It’s true! 🙂

11. Whoa!! What imagery 🙂

12. Thank you. 🙂

13. This is one nice piece of storytelling. Loved it.

14. Thank you, Ron! 🙂

15. Superb

16. Thank you, Ruby. 🙂

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18. Ha! Didn’t expect that haiku after reading your gravatar info! But your blog title suggests one could expect anything 🙂 Excellent use of the prompt words.

19. Thank you so much! Yeah, I guess my blog is kinda twisted. 🙂

20. Love it–very unique 😀

21. Thank you again! 🙂

22. Reads like a horror story I want to continue reading. 😉

23. Thank you, Vashti!